Mar 19, 2010

BIG BROWN EYES


Leaning against wall astutely,
With a quilt of silence,
You proffered me inimicalness,
But for your Big Brown Eyes, I'll stay forever.

At aurora you broached,
With smile that astound my senses,
You returned back to where you were at nox,
But for your BIG Brown Eyes, I'll stay forever.

Morning after you were unlaxed,
Solaced talks of yours specked empathy,
With doldrums at your mind farewell you bade,
But for your Big Brown Eyes, I'll stay forever.
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For ever and ever and ever and ever.

23 Thoughts:

Nalini Hebbar said...

sweet and short love poem! WOW

nil said...

Loved it! BIG BIG BIGG time!

nil said...

and the picture! Awesome stuff Omi! Like really really awesome!

BIG Omi said...

@ nalini Habbar,

Thanks

@ Nil,

Thank you very much.. but this is really nothing as compared to your latest post!
BIG Hug n thanks to you.

blunt edges said...

as the song goes "forever is a long long time when you've lost your way"

neat :)

Koo said...

Awesome! :)
It's like a song..

Btw, FRIENDS!! CENTRAL PERK!! Love the layout :D :D

Chandrika Shubham said...

Beautiful pic and beautiful poem. :) Enjoyed reading each and every line. :)

NIM said...

woah! Friends fanatic? i likey :D
i loved the picture u'v used...
nice poem :)

nil said...

Hugs right back!
And dude, you're good! Art can't be compared. And what you've written,is art :)
Cheers!

♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ ayu ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ said...

hi~ thanks for the warm visit in my blog..ill follow you now and check our your posts soon so i hope you follow mine as well..

thanks~

xxx,
ayu :3

Arati Harikumar said...

nice....quite profound in one way....liked it!!!

kimber doll said...

Thanks for your comments on my blog!
Did you wrtie this poem? It's very nice =)

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♫♪♥W!nK♥♪♫ said...

Amazing picture :)
Beautiful poem!
Keep writing!!
Wink♪♫

nil said...

Go read my blog
you've been awarded! :)

DiDo said...

made me go Wow... awesomee poem... keep writing.. ...i'm gonna come bck for more :)

rtfgvb7813a said...

IS VERY GOOD..............................

abby said...

something different on a blog real writing.. lol well i think you know what i mean . nice!

Dhanya said...

This is just oh SO AWESOME! Great work! Complimented by an apt pic I should add...

BIG Omi said...

@ Blunt Edges,
Thanks Bro! Forever for me is one month :P

@ Koo,
Thanku !! Keep coming

@ Chandrika Shubham
Glad u enjoyed!

@ Nil,
:) U r a cutie! XOXOX

@ Ayu,
Sure I Will! Thanks

@ Arati,

Thanks darling! :D

@ kimber doll,

Yep very much from me! Thanks

@ Anonymous,
Thanks, But no thanks.

@ Winky,
THanks girl! Keep winking!

@ Nil,
Thanks for the award!
Check out my sidebar.
Lotsa Luv!

@ Dido,

Thanks for making me smile with tht comment!

@Abby,
I know what u mean! We all know! Thanks and keep coming!

@ Dhanya,
Ohh ohh celebrity blogger on my blog! :D Thankx Dhanya!

Nile said...

nice .... keep writing ...

Haddock said...

Brownies...... :-) For a minute I was fooled.

AS said...

hii

first tym here

very nice blog :)
alchemist is an evergreen bookk yes 150 page wonder!

the poem is really good.. :)